You overwrite the end. "It's transparent and sad" would have been far better. By inserting the "quite" and the "rather" and by dividing the thoughts into two sentences, your ending comes off as a failed attempt at sophistication.
You overwrite the end. "It's transparent and sad" would have been far better. By inserting the "quite" and the "rather" and by dividing the thoughts into two sentences, your ending comes off as a failed attempt at sophistication.
You overwrite the end. "It's transparent and sad" would have been far better. By inserting the "quite" and the "rather" and by dividing the thoughts into two sentences, your ending comes off as a failed attempt at sophistication.